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Do people ever think before they speak? Cause they should. They don't know what it can do to a person's life when they get made fun of.
over 5 years ago Sheri said:
This is powerful. I love the emotion and word choice.
over 5 years ago Lila Malfoy Black said:
It was raw, and real, and true. The descriptions of the emotions were done well. Nice job.
over 5 years ago Charming Cheshire said:
I think you overuse the words "fell/feeling" and "care", but other than that I really could connect with this and overall enjoyed the piece
over 5 years ago Audrey Burne said:
I guess I'm not the only one who feels that way.
I used to be mistreated at a school I went to before I moved and this poem is how I felt. I love it!
over 5 years ago Charlotte Hennessey said:
i like the meaning in this, but try putting in more depth with imager/fig. lang. :)
and it's because not cause :P :)