Car Wreck

Car Wreck

1 chapter / 490 words

Approximately 2 minutes to read


This happened to my in first grade. One of the scariest moments of my life


Writing, Short Story


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about 4 years ago Rose Cherie said:

As I was reading this, I was just thinking the entire time: "Wow, life is so short." Makes me actually think about these things instead of taking them for credit...



almost 5 years ago Insertnamehere said:

good story


almost 6 years ago Maia Sheinfeld said:

I am sorry this happened to you :( I think your sentences are a little bit short and choppy at times, and you need to include a little more detail throughout the story, especially when you are in the accident. Hope this helps, :)


about 6 years ago Ana Mia Depri said:

Well, to tell the truth, I would have cried if I wasn't at school...the descriptions were great, though I would like to know if everyone in the car was ok. Other than that, it was awesome.


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about 4 years ago Summer Kingston said:

This is a great piece and I could tell that it was an experience you went through. You had good sensory images, although your sentences were a bit choppy. The emotion puts into perspective how short life can be.


about 6 years ago Sarah G.A. said:

Great Job you had be clinging on from beggining to end BRAVA BRAVA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!