Car Wreck

Car Wreck

1 chapter / 490 words

Approximately 2 minutes to read

Description:

This happened to my in first grade. One of the scariest moments of my life

Genres:

Writing, Short Story

Comments(13)

Me

over 3 years ago Myla Stewart said:

As I was reading this, I was just thinking the entire time: "Wow, life is so short." Makes me actually think about these things instead of taking them for credit...

M...

Unknown

over 4 years ago Insertnamehere said:

good story

Dsc02568

about 5 years ago Maia Sheinfeld said:

I am sorry this happened to you :( I think your sentences are a little bit short and choppy at times, and you need to include a little more detail throughout the story, especially when you are in the accident. Hope this helps, :)

Meee

over 5 years ago Ana Mia Depri said:

Well, to tell the truth, I would have cried if I wasn't at school...the descriptions were great, though I would like to know if everyone in the car was ok. Other than that, it was awesome.

Reviews(2)

Summer hearts

over 3 years ago Summer Kingston said:

This is a great piece and I could tell that it was an experience you went through. You had good sensory images, although your sentences were a bit choppy. The emotion puts into perspective how short life can be.

Meeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

over 5 years ago Sarah G.A. said:

Great Job you had be clinging on from beggining to end BRAVA BRAVA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!