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over 1 year ago Lady Red said:
I loved this. I loved how you set the scene. As I was reading this wonderful short piece, I was imagining this all happening as a classic black and white movie with rain and a thunderstorm in the background.
over 1 year ago Nerdy Cat of Stress said:
over 1 year ago Molly Uitenbroek said:
I feel like you should write more to the story! I want to read more!
over 5 years ago Jacqui A. said:
That's amazing and creepy and really really well written! Good job!
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