Innocence Lost

Innocence Lost

8 chapters / 11189 words

Approximately about 1 hour to read

Description:

When Kyra Night's parents are killed she thinks her life is over. It is off to Iceland to live with her mother's brother. But when she is kidnapped by a mysterious, supposed CIA agent things turn around. His name is Chase, he works undercover in terrorist cells and helps destroy them. He said he wants to train Kyra as his apprentice. The big question Kyra has to answer is now what?

Sorry if the grammer is pretty bad I wrote this in 7th grade and I'm really busy and I do not have enough hours in the day to go back and edit every little detail. So just bear with me :)

Genres:

Action, Adventure, Novel

Comments(12)

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over 5 years ago Sammy said:

Hey... Calix.... :) I really like it, I feel so bad for ky in the first one, ugghhh I just wanna go beat those two girls up myself! Nobody deserves to be treated like that! I am sooooo gonna read the next one! Miss you already, have fun surfing

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over 5 years ago A Girl That Writes said:

this is really cool :D i'd love to know where this goes!

Pick this one

almost 6 years ago Calix Ride said:

Okay I am trying out a new name for the first and second book of the Spy Game Trilogy

Pick this one

almost 6 years ago Calix Ride said:

Okay I'll give a hint: recruiting

Reviews(3)

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about 5 years ago Naomi said:

I loved this story! I noticed that when people were talking, you would say something like (not that you said this in your story, just an example) "I really like your hair he said". When it should really be "I really like your hair." He said. You get what I mean? Other than that, this was really good and I cant wait to read some more :)

Ex sky

over 5 years ago Sammy said:

Not to be a tough critic, but you should check over some of the grammar and spelling in your chapters, I love the whole story, I really do. It's just hard to understand when you use the wrong tense, or I don't know what a word is. Over-all though, I love all the chapters, I want you to keep writing this series, and if you don't, I will just look forward to what-ever else you write because you are a great author. You could be the next Stephen King!