This was written during an psychotic episode. Instead of coming in and going to sleep, like I should have done, I came in and wrote this. Some of my best poetry comes from my episodes, so I guess don't look a gift horse in the mouth, even though I am focusing more on novel writing than poetry, I have enough of it to fill this website and then some. I will share what I can when I can. My time is in short supply these days.
The language in this brings the reader out of the tale, but in a good way; if that makes sense. It's a bit abrupt like the cat dashing across his/her field of vision and somehow add to the poem. It was interesting and captivating. Keep up the good work.
Comments(2)
8 months ago Amos Magee said:
Loved your story. You write really well. Keep writing. A.M.
over 2 years ago A. Ember Boyer said:
The language in this brings the reader out of the tale, but in a good way; if that makes sense. It's a bit abrupt like the cat dashing across his/her field of vision and somehow add to the poem. It was interesting and captivating. Keep up the good work.
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