Strange and Wild and Beautiful

Strange and Wild and Beautiful

44 chapters / 14886 words

Approximately about 1 hour to read

Description:

When Princess Alianne is murdered, the already unstable country of Khamir erupts. Never gonna be finished.

Genres:

Fantasy, Romance, Novel

Comments(8)

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almost 5 years ago Tyanna J Snider said:

Your a great descriptor! You make us (the reader) feel as though we are in the story which is very hard to accomplish! Great job! Can't wait to read the third chapter!

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about 5 years ago Mermaid Annabella said:

Intriguing! I like your descriptions and detail; very well-written :) Critique: "Silent now she mentioned." There should be a comma after "Silent now" :)

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about 5 years ago Joanne Curtis said:

More, more! I like it!

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about 5 years ago e. j. mcdaddecock said:

I just want to say that there is an actual book called Deep and Dark and Dangerous...It's really good and so was yours!

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about 5 years ago Hannah Sproch said:

This is a very interesting idea, and your descriptions are great! Your voice really sets the time that it take place, which I congratulate you on. I'm not very skilled at making my characters have accents or making the time period obvious. Oh, and your names are just awesome. :)

I'm curious, are you eventually going to publish this? It's a great story, so you should, but I have to warn you about the name. I have actually read a story called "Deep and Dark and Dangerous" by Mary Downing Hawn a few years back. It's pretty famous, considering that I read it due to the fact that it was nominated for an award. So, maybe you want to change one of the words? Perhaps replace dangerous with deadly? Or delirious? I don't know, I'm just trying to think of words that start with D... Dank?

I'm sorry, I don't mean to rain on your parade, especially not on Christmas, but I just wanted to tell you before you got too attached to the title. I know that it would make me upset, especially if I've been working on something or a while. It's such a cool title too! :( I love the story, though. The poor princess! I LOVE the way you describe her, in the first chapter and through other characters in later ones. :) And the first two sentences of chapter 4, they are just so...blunt. Which is just plain awesome. I don't know why, but I really like the intro to that character. ;) Another cool name, too. You are such a genius when it comes to names. It takes me hours to come up with barely sufficient one, let alone such epic ones you do.

I hope you add more soon! :D

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over 5 years ago Emily Grayceson said:

Wow. This is an interesting story line, in a good way. Its very dramactic and has a lot of darkness, the good kind. Kinda like dark chocolate, for lack of terms. The descriptions are very clear and concise. Overall a very VERY good read :)