Hold your hand again: A Poem

Hold your hand again: A Poem

1 chapter / 438 words

Approximately 2 minutes to read

Description:

I like to write poems, but this is the first time I've actually posted. I hope you guys like it

Genres:

Writing, Romance, Poetry

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over 5 years ago Nicole said:

A beautiful poem, overall. Just a couple things: I think that when you say tears dot her pillow, it sounds too dainty compared with the next line. Maybe "stained" or something? Then the line "tears burn..." is a bit repetetive. You've already mentioned tears. Then you switch tenses A LOT. either be in the present tense or the past, not both. Oh, and finally, the line "he seems so far... Off in the distance" a simile would do nicely there. Anywho, it was a great poem- luv ya! :)