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Pain
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Approximately half a minute to read
Description:
About a fight I had a while go, but its all good now :)
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Approximately half a minute to read
Description:
About a fight I had a while go, but its all good now :)
Comments(10)
about 2 years ago Amina said:
Amazing!!!!
over 2 years ago Axie said:
Man, i'm glad it's all good now because your poem was so raw and sad. I like how your overwhelming language reflects the mood you were in. Goood Job~!
over 2 years ago Ashton Akir Smith said:
Thats really spectacular! Bravo. Ya, I hear you sometimes I feel like that as well. I wrote a poem for the trappedcontest, its called "In the Inside". I'd really like it if a good poet like you would give me some feedback? Thank you for sharing your poem :)
over 2 years ago Kelsiee said:
this is really good, and i loved the ending
Reviews(3)
over 2 years ago Samantha Eves said:
Thanks for pointing it out! I changed it!
over 2 years ago Talia said:
I liked the rhyming of the poem. I also liked the flow of it. The only criticism I have is you used the word shed too much. Overall, it was a great poem!