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About a fight I had a while go, but its all good now :)
about 4 years ago Amina said:
over 4 years ago Axie said:
Man, i'm glad it's all good now because your poem was so raw and sad. I like how your overwhelming language reflects the mood you were in. Goood Job~!
over 4 years ago Ashton Akir Smith said:
Thats really spectacular! Bravo.
Ya, I hear you sometimes I feel like that as well.
I wrote a poem for the trappedcontest, its called "In the Inside". I'd really like it if a good poet like you would give me some feedback?
Thank you for sharing your poem :)
over 4 years ago Kelsiee said:
this is really good,
and i loved the ending
over 4 years ago Samantha Eves said:
Thanks for pointing it out! I changed it!
over 4 years ago Talia said:
I liked the rhyming of the poem. I also liked the flow of it. The only criticism I have is you used the word shed too much. Overall, it was a great poem!