A breath towards death

A breath towards death

1 chapter / 57 words

Approximately less than 20 seconds to read

Description:

A short poem:)

Genres:

Writing, Poetry

Comments(7)

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over 5 years ago Christina Michelle said:

I was drawn to this because it's a poem (I love reading other people's poetry) and I wasn't disappointed. It's short but it gets to the point and you did a good job rhyming :)

Sam_0407

about 6 years ago Chloe Wright said:

Thankyou, i will sort them out!:)

Raindrops

about 6 years ago Anna B. said:

The last stanza has some typos that you should fix, but it was really good. I liked the rhymes especially, which pretty much made the whole poem so much better. It was really good!

Nightqueen1

about 6 years ago Nyx Blake said:

Really nice, I'm terrible at rythms and I get so many people asking me to make them more rythtic (sp). I can see what they mean. It really adds to the poem! Good job!

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