1 chapter / 343 words

Approximately 2 minutes to read


This story is for the seventeen magazine contest, so please read this first!!!!! It was partially inspired by the song Always by Panic! At The Disco.


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almost 6 years ago Emily Mertz said:

This was different and interesting. Good job!


almost 6 years ago Kat Cook said:

Thanks for reading and for the feedback, guys! I really appriciate it! :)

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almost 6 years ago Elizabeth Payne said:

I like how this was spent mostly on description but still managed to tell a whole story. And I also liked how there was a twist ending- definitely not the "happily ever after" I was expecting! My only advice would be to break it up into separate paragraphs. Nice job and good luck in the contest!


almost 6 years ago christa hatch said:

there was one sentence that seemed a lottle grammatically awkward to me but other than that I think you did a great short story :) I'll be honest, it was really great and I kinda wish I could read more XD well, good luck in the contest ^^


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