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What if I told you that people had bar codes on their skin, and not like a tattoo that people got, but something that will never come off, even with tattoo remover. Don't believe me? This is how I live. I'm a spy. I'm a product of society.
over 1 year ago Grace said:
awesome!!! love this story :D so you decided not to even rewrite spies r us? well this is cool :D write moar!!!!
over 1 year ago The Consulting Aviator "Darko" said:
Whoa! I find this concept exciting, and pretty freakin' cool!:D.. Yet freaky at the same timeO.o.
over 1 year ago Cait Cher said:
This reminds me of reading the "Uglies" series. I love it. You need to fix a few things though.
Chapter 1: "shook" should be "shock"
Chapter 2: "my" should be "me"
"percious" is "precious"
"sholder" is "shoulder"
Chapter 3: "because Jack kissed me." I don't know if you did that on purpose, but I'm not sure.
Can't wait for chapter 4 :)