We Are The Broken

We Are The Broken

1 chapter / 1633 words

Approximately 8 minutes to read

Description:

These kids have been beaten, they have been neglected, they have been forgotten. They have never been loved, and they are never happy except for when they meet in an alley in New York City....

Comments(13)

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over 4 years ago Sky Nicole said:

Wow. So sad but true. I don't know how parents can live with themselves when harming their kids. It's awful. Besides that, I really liked this piece. I like your style of writing. The story flowed smoothly and kept me wanting to read until the end. Great work!

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over 4 years ago Sarah G said:

Is there a scream button? Cuz that's what I did at the end of the story. No joke.

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over 5 years ago Charlotte Carpenter said:

I really liked this, because you wrote it with such confidence and power. I could really feel bad for all of the kids, and you start to care for them. It is really touching, and the ending was fabulous. You've earned yourself a follow. Great job!

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almost 6 years ago Matteus Harper said:

Wow. Just wow.

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almost 3 years ago Raevyn said:

A very, very, VERY sad story. There are a few grammatical mistakes, but overall I love it.

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about 3 years ago Isabella Yearwood said:

This story is truly amazing, I love that i was clearly able to see what was happening and not just get glimpses at it. The ending was truly shocking, and very unexpected. Over all I can't get over this story, I think I've read it about four times now.Great work.