Why?

Why?

1 chapter / 180 words

Approximately less than a minute to read

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Writing, Poetry

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Comments(6)

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almost 6 years ago Salome' Byrd said:

You convey the emotion really well, and make it really speak to the reader. You did a good job with this.

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about 6 years ago G. Gómez said:

Th first couple lines really grabbed me. I would have liked a bit more explanation of what the bad memories are, and where the character (you?) is. Nice work. Some of these lines (especially at the beginning) are really high quality. Keep up the good work.

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about 6 years ago G. Gómez said:

Th first couple lines really grabbed me. I would have liked a bit more explanation of what the bad ,memories are, and where the character (you?) is. Nice work. Some of these lines (especially at the beginning) are really high quality. Keep up the good work.

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about 6 years ago Shortskie said:

The pondering of questions is a tough thing especially when depressing thoughts seep into the mind. Some of these are easily to relate to. Wonderful job.

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