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Confusing Ways of Love.
3 chapters / 2958 words
Approximately 15 minutes to read
Description:
-ContestStillGoingOn- **I understand that some things can get a little bit rushed. That's only do to the contest word limit. Please don't comment saying that things are rushed; I am aware of that and it will be fixed after the contest. Thank you!** In my Girls With Grit Entry, Cathy gets taught an important life lesson.
Comments(59)
7 months ago Jeeny Then said:
Aww...*sigh* SOSOOSOSOSOS CUTE
8 months ago V.V. Nunley said:
AWWWW. This was seriously cute.
I know the description said it was rushed, but most of it seemed paced well to me. It was a short story, after all.
If you ever turn this into a full-length deal, that would be delightful.
10 months ago Molly Black said:
Please come check out my page. I'm a new writer and have a few stories. One of them is the a Magic contest. It would be greatly appreciated.
12 months ago Taylor said:
The little girl is adorable, but I feel like it could be more in her voice, you know? When she's thinking, she sounds too mature. But other than that, this was amazing. I loved it! Great job. :)
Reviews(6)
about 1 year ago Coje Jensenshire said:
Oh.. My God. This was SO Friggen CUUUTE! :D There were some spelling mistakes (As you are aware) But other than that I didn't notice anything except for it was just so adorable! :3 Great Job!
over 1 year ago Trina Elisabeth said:
Aww ^-^ Wow, this was truly a wonderful story. You totally capture that innocent childlike perspective in the first two chapters, and the third is amazing in that you get through so much in so little time. I know you said it probably seemed rushed, but honestly I didn't notice that much. I'm sure when you expand after the contest it'll be even better, though. Really I didn't see many issues that I would change. Your writing style is really lovely and I feel like you totally captured each moment in every way that you could. Both the conversations and the descriptions were amazing. I also really like that you actually use the word 'grit' in this piece, because not many entries have that and I think it really adds something. She has grit and though she began to forget it, she did remember. And the fact that it was the same guy... *melts* I really have no critiques! :)