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Approximately 6 minutes to read
An individual and their dog are all alone one night, when the unexplained happens. Where are they are they and how did they end up here? Read to find out.
about 5 years ago Crimson said:
Awwww i love dogs! this is a really amazing story!!!
about 5 years ago Cait Cher said:
This story is suspenseful.
over 5 years ago Eva Sirois said:
Wow, this was amazing! You're very good at creating hook beginnings :) Love it! Keep writing!
over 5 years ago Felicia Spahr said:
I really like the concept of your story; the dream within a dream is exciting and draws the reader in.
I am wondering, though, what the significance of the green sea glass is? It just seems arbitrary--maybe there is a reason why she dreamed of it? Is it connected with a family secret that she's been mulling over? Is it a symbol for something? I'd love to see what else you can do with the green sea glass, or another object that you use in your next piece.
over 5 years ago Kross said:
So, I gotta tell you, I really did enjoy this. I loved your story, it all flowed well. I only had one...two, nags. One, you use the same word(s) over. A lot. and two, well, I had one, but I forgot it. Oh well. Keep it up, like your style.