Count Down

Count Down

1 chapter / 455 words

Approximately 2 minutes to read


A love story. Giving up everything to be with the one you love, but probably not in the way you're thinking. :) Read it through. The ending my surprise you.



over 5 years ago Madysen said:

I absolutely loved this! It was gripping and intense and shows how much she really loved him. I can't wait to read more of your work. I love this story. Please keep writing! Although, like most of the others, I am confused as to why she killed herself I liked that he reassured her and she trusted him fully

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over 5 years ago Luquas said:

Wow amazing but why did she have to jump? I am a bit confused.


over 5 years ago Ophie said:

how'd you get so many tags?! the largest amount i can have is 3!!!


over 5 years ago Jasmine q. Lee said:

I thought it was well written and I really liked the count down. However, I'm a little confused about the point of her suicide



over 6 years ago Nicole Morgan said:

This was very cleverly put together. I agree with some that it's still a little foggy. She's killing herself to be with her love, but why? The scenery could be painted a little better in the reader's mind. It's a very good plot line; I think you can expand it just a LITTLE more.


almost 7 years ago Rachael Jackson said:

In the beginning I had a lot more detail but I went over the word limit and this is the only form that I found made sense. It was all or nothing and once the contest is over I will expand it back to how it was so that you can see the whole picture.