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This is to help me develop and add depth to my character, Rosalie, through different scenarios. If you have an idea, feel free to suggest it! She is a main character in 'Hidden'.
over 2 years ago Sonja L said:
Hi Emma! Sorry I've been missing in action for a while. I liked your second chapter. Rosalie's interaction with her hamster brought out her sweetness. And the descriptions of the pet were really thoughtful.
over 2 years ago Lizzie Madloch said:
wow! your imagery is quite exquiste. the story was really interesting and i just want more more mroe! i love the third person impersonal feel and your style of writing in general.
great job :)
over 2 years ago Emma said:
It's a really good idea, so thankyou for suggesting it and then reading mine!
This has already given me a new idea to incorporate into my story, and I think I will use the ice skating as a flashback.
Okay, I'll try to write something about pets when I can, and maybe we will see more of the mystery boy later. Maybe :D
Yay! I'm so glad you're doing this. :) I had such a clear picture of Rosalie stumbling and flying through the ice rink. You write action really well! Since Rosalie seems shy, I'm curious about whether she has pets or some other companion she feels most comfortable around? Of course, I'm curious about this mystery boy too.
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