Rosalie [In Progress]

Rosalie [In Progress]

2 chapters / 1388 words

Approximately 7 minutes to read

Description:

This is to help me develop and add depth to my character, Rosalie, through different scenarios. If you have an idea, feel free to suggest it! She is a main character in 'Hidden'.

Genres:

Writing

Comments(5)

London trip!

over 1 year ago Daisie said:

I liked this story so much that I think you should carry it on! Its left me on a cliffhanger! Who was that boy???? LOL! xx

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over 1 year ago Sonja L said:

Hi Emma! Sorry I've been missing in action for a while. I liked your second chapter. Rosalie's interaction with her hamster brought out her sweetness. And the descriptions of the pet were really thoughtful.

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over 1 year ago Lizzie Madloch said:

wow! your imagery is quite exquiste. the story was really interesting and i just want more more mroe! i love the third person impersonal feel and your style of writing in general.

great job :)

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over 1 year ago Emma [InTheClouds] said:

It's a really good idea, so thankyou for suggesting it and then reading mine! This has already given me a new idea to incorporate into my story, and I think I will use the ice skating as a flashback. Okay, I'll try to write something about pets when I can, and maybe we will see more of the mystery boy later. Maybe :D

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