I miss you.

I miss you.

1 chapter / 429 words

Approximately 2 minutes to read

Description:

Please read and give me some feedback ! (:

Genres:

Writing, Biography, Drama

Comments(8)

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almost 6 years ago Gina Powers said:

Great job, Cristina! The first line immediately hooks the reader, and it kept me focused until the end. I'll give you additional feedback to make it even better in class. :)

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almost 6 years ago Sydney said:

That was incredible! Good job :)

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almost 6 years ago Melody Newsong said:

Wow!!! AWESOME!! That's all I have to say. :) Oh, that, and GOOD LUCK GIRL!!

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almost 6 years ago Valentina Novoa said:

I loved it ! Its beautiful !

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almost 6 years ago Ashton Nagel said:

So I thought this was completely adorable! I love the introduction of "It takes three words to make a heart skip a beat" That instantly hooked me! But yes I LOVED this. I do have a suggestion for you to take in consideration: breaking your story down into seperate paragraphs rather than just a whole one. It just makes it more reader friendly. But other than that great job! Good luck in the contest