KEY TO HAPPINESS

KEY TO HAPPINESS

1 chapter / 109 words

Approximately half a minute to read

Description:

It's a poem about the search for happiness :)
Hope ya'll like it :)
Please heart if ya'll do :)
Thank you!! :)

Genres:

Writing, Poetry

Comments(17)

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over 5 years ago dipika said:

thanks a lot!!!!!!! :)

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over 5 years ago dipika said:

thank you so much!!!!

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over 5 years ago Pun-Rocker said:

I thoroughly enjoyed this piece, though I'm not the world best poetry critique, I feel that you could use a few more powerful words, and conjure a little more imagery here, but other than that- Loved it.

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over 5 years ago dipika said:

thanks alot!!!!

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over 5 years ago ACB said:

That's a very creative metaphor you've got going here! I like how the end is this great reveal of what she/he has been searching for. However, I think you should add in some deeper foreshadowing of her search for happiness before the end. In the beginning of the poem, I thought she was searching for a person or something, and I then had to read the poem again once I fully understood the metaphor to really fully appreciate the poem (and there was much to appreciate!!). Overall, nice job! =)

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over 5 years ago irene said:

Brilliant