I absolutely adore this. I love that you kept this unique and individual, while still making it relateable. This was like some sort of intimate diary that was actually a pleasure to read- it's hard to come across things like that nowadays. Fantastic thing, you got here (:
AHHH! I loved this. This seems like the real you. So random and yourself. I loved the 'Charlie' part. That was my favourite. I loved this...so amazing and cleverly written. This is my most favourite piece I have EVER read of poems. Literally. I love humour and you seem to have a knack for it. Keep it up because I'll keep laughing.
Haylee
I love to add humour pieces to my stories too. I like making people smile and thats what you did with me. :)
Haha this is so hilarious, kinda confusing, but it's the type that it's perfectly okay that way xD Please write more, are these things you've actually wanted to say to people, or simply another writing piece?
Keep on writing :D
Comments(55)
3 days ago Zula D said:
super cute
8 months ago Abbey ♡ said:
This was really cute! I love the humor, and emotions in this. Very well done xD
8 months ago marina said:
I absolutely adore this. I love that you kept this unique and individual, while still making it relateable. This was like some sort of intimate diary that was actually a pleasure to read- it's hard to come across things like that nowadays. Fantastic thing, you got here (:
9 months ago Alice Liddell said:
This was so cute^.^ I really liked how you made it your own stories, but leaving it vauge enough for the reader to relate to her own life. Nice work:)
Reviews(5)
about 1 year ago Haylee LaBossiere said:
AHHH! I loved this. This seems like the real you. So random and yourself. I loved the 'Charlie' part. That was my favourite. I loved this...so amazing and cleverly written. This is my most favourite piece I have EVER read of poems. Literally. I love humour and you seem to have a knack for it. Keep it up because I'll keep laughing.
Haylee
I love to add humour pieces to my stories too. I like making people smile and thats what you did with me. :)
over 1 year ago Mariah Lynn ✌ said:
Haha this is so hilarious, kinda confusing, but it's the type that it's perfectly okay that way xD Please write more, are these things you've actually wanted to say to people, or simply another writing piece? Keep on writing :D