It All Starts With A Fight

It All Starts With A Fight

1 chapter / 2177 words

Approximately 11 minutes to read

Description:

A short memoir centered around how parents fighting affects the mind of an already depressed teenage girl. All events are true, as are the feelings. As this is hard to go back to and revise, it won't be the best; that and I don't want to change any of the emotions I let out. This was in fact more of a release than an intended story.
Better cover submissions are accepted.
©2012-2013 by Liza K.,all rights reserved.

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almost 2 years ago chlo pops said:

wow this is really good, this actually made me cry! this is the exact- and I mean exact same thing that happened to me.

Just to say some of the punctuation was wrong, but the vocab was really good.

well done!!!

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about 2 years ago Emily Kate said:

Wow; there is so much truth and emotion in this, and you pull the reader along at a fast an intense pace. It is beautifully done and your writing is very powerful--the beginning and ending are a good reminder and I'm sorry you had to go through this!

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over 2 years ago Conn said:

Sneaky business with the cover contest. I have 13 followers.

About the writing: Generally well-done and clearly emotional. I think that some of the emotional material could use some more detail and slowing down, but, other than that, it's great.

I will probably make a cover now, but don't be shocked if I don't.

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over 2 years ago Emma Bernstein said:

Ya I've been through this too and it sux a lot.

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