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almost 4 years ago InMyThoughtsForever said:
Another beautiful poem! I love how you repeat the line, "The grass is an ocean".
This was simply wonderful!
about 4 years ago Emma said:
about 4 years ago Maria Connors said:
over 4 years ago Emma said:
almost 4 years ago Agmedi said:
This is a wonderful piece. It gave me a peaceful vibe and it flowed very well. The line "The grass is an ocean" being repeated gave your poem a nice choral effect. Good job. :)
about 4 years ago Ayesha said:
This was a really good poem I loved how you compared the grass to an ocean, it was simple but really good:)