Waving in the Wind

Waving in the Wind

1 chapter / 66 words

Approximately half a minute to read

Genres:

Poetry

Comments(8)

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about 2 years ago InMyThoughtsForever said:

Another beautiful poem! I love how you repeat the line, "The grass is an ocean". This was simply wonderful! -Jess

Tulips

about 2 years ago Emma said:

thanks!

Conversee

about 2 years ago Maria Connors said:

Beautiful!

Tulips

over 2 years ago Emma said:

thanks guys!

Reviews(2)

Peace

almost 2 years ago Agmedi said:

This is a wonderful piece. It gave me a peaceful vibe and it flowed very well. The line "The grass is an ocean" being repeated gave your poem a nice choral effect. Good job. :)

Couple lift

over 2 years ago Ayesha said:

This was a really good poem I loved how you compared the grass to an ocean, it was simple but really good:)