Esmeralda's World

Esmeralda's World

2 chapters / 2216 words

Approximately 11 minutes to read

Description:

A fantasy novel :)
*Not finished - Editing soon*

Genres:

Adventure, Fantasy, Novel

Comments(6)

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over 5 years ago Laina O'Shields said:

Hook wise, this doesn't do much to draw you in. I ended up almost reading the whole first chapter. And i read the last few sentences of chapter two. If you wanted to get someone, those lines about the gem would do it. Your covers are amazing.. This one is why i picked this piece in the first place.

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over 5 years ago Philippa Cruz said:

Another Esmeralda ;) Thanks for all your support! I think this story is really good, keep going!

GO YOU, too ;D

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over 5 years ago Tara Poppleford said:

It's fantasy... All the names in this story are big and unrealistic.

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over 5 years ago Alexandrie Delacour said:

The name... I cannot get passed the name...

Esmerelda Topaz Meadowsmith? Really? Really?

Reviews(5)

Emma 's things

over 5 years ago Emma D'ArkAngelo said:

I think it very detailed. You twisted the english words to make your own thoughts straight and I think that is very hard to accomplish. I sorry some missing spacing that needs to be added. I also think you need more practice at writing conversations with your characters. If you look online, they will definitely help you and get more people intrigued!

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over 5 years ago Iris Dracarys said:

Great job, Jasminee! Very, very impressive. You really seem to have wrought a full-bore world and brought to life the characters of Esme and Georgie. The magic is simply magical. I can't wait to see what happens next. WHAT HAVE YOU DONE?? I'M HOOKED! AND FOLLOWING YOU!! :P