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A man takes a walk to clear his mind...
over 5 years ago James Myers said:
Thank you for reading, and for the kind words. This was a contest entry for another site a year or so ago. I didn't win, but I was happy with the piece in the end.
over 5 years ago Dee Dee said:
Holy shit. HOLY. FREAKING. SHIT.
I want to say that I saw that coming...but I totally didn't.
I mean, I had a feeling sometime during the middle of the story, but then I thought, "nah, he wouldn't." but then he DID and I was just like, "Holy shit!!"
So, in shorter words, I loved it. The ending was perfect! The way that it happened so sudden, but not so much so that it felt like it happened out of nowhere.
Excellent work. I really didn't see that coming.
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