While Life Goes On

While Life Goes On

3 chapters / 7936 words

Approximately 40 minutes to read

Description:

Blink. That’s how fast your life can be over. The average person blinks about twenty thousand times per day. That’s twenty thousand chances to die. They say life goes on, but my life will never be normal again. This is my story, the ending of one chapter and the start of the next. I don't know where it will take me, but this is what happens while life goes on.

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over 4 years ago Danni said:

I am fairly new, but this is one of the best pieces I've read on here so far. I love the character relationships, I love your balance of introspection, metaphor, dialogue, and actions, and so far the storyline's looking excellent. Love!

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over 5 years ago T.X.Jaine said:

the dream was my favorite part :) this was fantastic

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almost 6 years ago Katharine Allison said:

That was brilliant! I don't know how you did it, but you left my eyes absolutely glued to the screen for a solid 20 minutes as I read the whole thing. You're an amazing writer, and this was a great story.

Keep writing! --K

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almost 6 years ago Ricky Cheers said:

I've dealt a lot with court, I know first hand; having been falsely acused; which is why I write now. You have talent. Great B+

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over 6 years ago A.S.M. Michellins said:

I see you have done more than enough research for this novel, which is very smart. I am currently writing a novel in which the main character deals with court, so if you tell me where you found all of this information, it would be much apriciated. This story is moving and emotional and all around perfect. A very good work of art.