Brianne has never been one for love. Her friend Kyla has. So what happens when Kyla forces her to throw an apple across the cafeteria to see who her future love is? Nothing good, obviously. Or so Brianne thought. Who would have known that a stupid apple could be right?
I loved this!! I read it whenever I could (which is pretty hard when you have a brother :D) and I was laughing like I was crazy. And then I was crying. My parents got really worried about my 'mental health'. It was amazing!
At 1st i wasn't going to read this but i was hooked after the 1st chapter. This is beyond amazing and i cant stop wondering about what will happen next. The characters are so well developed and you make me love them all. i really love how dannnon isn't a typical "popular" person and he is so unique in personality. i stayed up till almost 5 am reading this but then i had to go to bed but after i woke up i started again till i finished what you have so far. keep writing and please write more now before i explode!!!
You need tobe careful with your paragraphs, like where you said,
I wonder if he knows how gay he sounds?
Well I'm not gonna tell him.
This should be one paragraph, not 2. But otherwise I didn't find anything wrong and I really hope you continue!! I'm looking forward to it.
Comments(32)
about 1 month ago Anise Wyatt said:
This story is so amazing. Nice job.
2 months ago Maria said:
I've ready this story twice now. I still cry everytime. I really wish you'd finish it. It's amazing!
5 months ago Haley Burgmyer said:
UPDATE SOON!!!! Please!
-Haley
8 months ago Anna X said:
I loved this!! I read it whenever I could (which is pretty hard when you have a brother :D) and I was laughing like I was crazy. And then I was crying. My parents got really worried about my 'mental health'. It was amazing!
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about 1 year ago Ashley said:
At 1st i wasn't going to read this but i was hooked after the 1st chapter. This is beyond amazing and i cant stop wondering about what will happen next. The characters are so well developed and you make me love them all. i really love how dannnon isn't a typical "popular" person and he is so unique in personality. i stayed up till almost 5 am reading this but then i had to go to bed but after i woke up i started again till i finished what you have so far. keep writing and please write more now before i explode!!!
over 1 year ago A.L. Eliason said:
You need tobe careful with your paragraphs, like where you said, I wonder if he knows how gay he sounds? Well I'm not gonna tell him. This should be one paragraph, not 2. But otherwise I didn't find anything wrong and I really hope you continue!! I'm looking forward to it.