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Anala's mother is dying of cancer, and she doesn't know how to handle the situation. Should she hide from the problem or face it? Cover Credit: ledernierjour
over 4 years ago Angela Ku said:
omgosh :( :(
i nearly cried
this is sooooo sad!
(btw i read this one without swapping cause ur other ones were so good i just had to :])
over 4 years ago Ashley Nicole said:
Aw, this is so sad! But I could just feel Anala's heartache over her mother's sickness. It was lovely! ;D
over 4 years ago S. E. Cates said:
I give it an 8 out of ten, partly because cancer stories are a little too sad for me usually. It reminded me of this Buffy episode ("The Body") which is probably the highest compliment I can give. It was so sad and yet so simple.
over 4 years ago Gaby S. said:
10!!! I literally have tears in my eyes. Good job writing about such a strong subject. You made it heartfelt, but didn't over-do at all.
about 5 years ago TJ said:
Wow this is really sad yet beautiful I love it.
about 5 years ago PrincessPanda said:
I know I've read this already, but I just had to go over it again. It's deep emotion and imagery really made me feel how the main character was feeling. I absolutely love the way you described everything, it was pure beauty. I'm a sucker for sob stories, and you have an amazing one here. I wish you luck in the contest! From one writer to another! :)