The Red Dragon

The Red Dragon

1 chapter / 95 words

Approximately half a minute to read

Description:

The Red Dragon; the name strikes fear in the people of Tokyo's hearts. The name having been born from the fact that he has red eyes. He is a menace, having murdered many people as the Renegades' favorite killer. No one is able to stop him until the night his mission goes awry and he is tossed into the ocean to drown.
However, he ends up on South California's shore where a young girl finds him. Her family takes him in and nurses him back to health. As it turns out, he isn't at all what everyone believes him to be and as time goes on feelings grow between them. Still, his past lurks around every corner. Will he ever be able to be happy? And what is the reason behind the weird poem and his strange headaches?
Cover made by Sandra Taylor

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over 3 years ago Georgia Cline said:

Great! I've read the first three chapters and plan in continuing. You've really done a great job of snagging my attention and holding it. Especially intriguing is the hint of the fantastical, like Shyba's visions and eyes, and Kiara's hair/gloves. I really look forward to seeing how that develops further on. Altogether, wonderful work! You mentioned in the book that this will be published. Will you be self-publishing, or submitting it to a traditional publisher? Best of luck either way!

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almost 4 years ago CeceO (On&off) said:

I read the first chapter. Very interesting. Makes me want to read on---which I will at some point

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about 4 years ago Lilith said:

im giving you the whole shebang! i read 10 chapters and plan to come back. if you get this book printed or sell it on ebook or whatever i will be buying it. THIS IS AWESOME!

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about 4 years ago Rose Cherie said:

Hot damn! I finally finished it! Whoop! Go me!

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about 4 years ago Trail of Glitter said:

Its different from what I would have read, but it was very good! I loved yoyr characters, and thought they were unique and awesome! Your descriptions were really good, but you need to elaborate in some areas. I think this serves as a perfect second rough draft. I saw a few weird phrases, but nothing crazy! Overall, I enjoyed this and I look forward to reading more!

Rating: 9/10

--Glitter

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about 4 years ago Anneka Wittenberg said:

Again, first chapter read.

My critique here follows the same scheme as the one for Marked, actually (not surprisingly, since you're the same author as it XD). It still reminds me very poignantly of an anime.... and I'm not sure why. You're going to have to figure that one out yourself. Are you familiar with anime?

Uhm... here, I did notice that right in the middle of your story you posted this block of song lyrics. Maybe you should break it into chunks with details in the middle or else delete them. It didn't feel right and gave the story a lagging feeling.

Your characters, however, shine. Nice dialogue. You've got a knack for dialogue as well as how your characters use it.

Looking forward to seeing your work in the future (although I'm sure you don't want to see a lot of me ^__^')! You've got some potential in writing, honestly!