Heart Breaker

Heart Breaker

8 chapters / 6060 words

Approximately 30 minutes to read

Description:

Ever been with some who broke your heart? Did it feel like they ripped it from your chest? Well this girl is about to teach everyone what true heart break is.

Genres:

Fantasy, Horror, Suspense

Comments(14)

Animegirl-4

about 5 years ago R.J. Jean said:

LOVED THIS!!! DETAILS= AMAZING!!! LOVE THIS TO DEATH!!! SO AMAZING!! COVER ROCKS TOO!! :) :) : )

Gregjasonfunderberger

over 5 years ago Cassie Rose said:

Read chapter 1 and 2! I liked the contrast between the MC and Eclipse. You did a good job of making them different, and yet seem like they had been living in the same skull together for as long as they have. Eclipse's voice and character was really awesome. You did a great job with the descriptions, too. Good job!

Pink2

over 5 years ago Sierra Noelle <3 said:

Oh-my-gosh!!!!!! That's exactly how I would be if I was a werewolf and I found out that a guy was cheating on me. That was awesome. You can read what I have on a book I'm working on called "Vampire's Dream." I also have three songs that would be good called "Forever Yours", "You Can't Fix This", and "I'm Sorry I Lied to You."

Curly_hair_by_tknk_large

over 5 years ago Salina Alicia said:

I thought it was well written. I also enjoyed the concept and it had great details.

Reviews(3)

Steampunk_clover-cover

over 5 years ago Kate Anders said:

Very interesting story. I really enjoyed it! I liked how the Chapter titles were really Lessons. That was very cool and original. I also liked the internal battle that prevails throughout the story. Your descriptions are amazing and really drew me in. Overall, a really great story! Keep it up!!

Rachael 01

almost 6 years ago R. E. Durbin said:

That was beyond creepy, but in a good way. The way you wrote Sebastian, Isabelle, and Eclipse was perfect. I truly felt as though I were right there with them. Isabelle's decline into revenge was brilliantly done.

Another thing I liked was the way you made the distinction between Eclipse and Isabelle, but still made it seem as though they were one and the same. It was well done!

All in all, a well written story.