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When 13 year old Alana skateboards into a wave pool at water world, she's thrown into a deep coma and has some strange dreams that make her feel like Alice from Wonderland.
over 3 years ago Asya Evilyn said:
Okay, You are not highly insane. Only slightly insane.
over 3 years ago Hibiki Morino said:
i think i just popped my spleen through my ribs...that was fudgin hilarious...
over 3 years ago Audrey said:
:D Made me laugh. So hard.
over 3 years ago Erith Rell said:
so cool, when is the next chapter?
p.s.- this iis from sydney m
over 3 years ago Josie Violin said:
Hey Jessie, it's Josie, your friend, again. Yes, that was a nice, amusing piece. I liked the title you gave it and the picture you used. That was very clever. I hope you can check me out at Josie Rudoff. KEEP WRITING!!!! You're doing great, Jessie! :D