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Forgotten

1 chapter / 447 words

Approximately 2 minutes to read

Description:

Please read this one!!
Anyways it's just a random and short piece I thought of. Hope you like it! (^_-)

Genres:

Writing, Fantasy

Comments(12)

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about 5 years ago Gin Ichimaru said:

Very good! i think its just amazing! i liked they way it was writen! Very good job!

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about 5 years ago Dream.Write.Read. said:

This was really good. Interesting take on your story. Great job

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over 5 years ago Willow J Flynn said:

This was sooo good. Great job on it!

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over 5 years ago Sabreana said:

So sad and well written! Heart, love and follow! Well done

Reviews(3)

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about 5 years ago Rebecca said:

Whoa. I mean, it's not like most poems about love, like how it's fantastic but the writer is forever alone and life sucks. It's beautiful. And it's long, but not so long the reader gets bored. Which is really hard to do.

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over 5 years ago Joni Juelissa said:

This was awesome! I really liked how the attempting saviors transformed into snow! I really enjoyed how you connected it all, the red ribbons and the scenery. It was brilliant depiction of the classic fairytale!

The only thing I no your ticed was that you said "a extravagant white dress" instead of an,but other than that poem was beautiful!