Boys and Bees

Boys and Bees

23 chapters / 34206 words

Approximately about 3 hours to read

Description:

When Lorabeth decided to fall in love, she knew it wasn't going to be easy. Unlike the bees that she trained, boys were strange, unpredictable creatures. Since the most popular girl in school, Hedda, receives love letters on a weekly basis, Lorabeth thought that taking a peek at those letters would help... or perhaps not. Lorabeth and Hedda are united by a strange deadly fire and a swarm of encroaching predators that threaten the school of apiology. Will Lorabeth be able to find true love and save her school from these mysterious enemies? And what does a coat rack, yellow ribbon, hypnotist, and tapioca have to do with it?

Cover Art by Tim Walker

Genres:

Romance, Serial, Novel
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over 5 years ago Gabrielle Laplume said:

HOW HAVE YOU NOT BEEN PUBLISHED?! You write very clearly, yet beautifully. I only have one thing I question:

“I heard about what happened. The Headmistress called our house in the middle of the night. She was so hysterical that I could almost hear her through the receiver.”

Uuuum wat? I would assume it was obvious he could hear her through the receiver.

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over 5 years ago Tiffany Schell said:

Oh, Kimberly, *do* please get a publisher! Your writing is just AMAZING! How do you have so much talent that you can create a world including so much imagination into a perfectly woven story? Your character development is SO good - each and every character is different, yet they are also imperfect, like in real life. In every writer, there is an impulse to make your person be perfect, but you are able to give each and every one of them weaknesses and strengths, different tastes, and a name that couldn't fit them more! Every event goes in a perfectly arranged order, unlike my stories with my amateur writing, where I sort of go all over the place, giving the character flashback memories and only occasional dialogue. Normally, I'll admit, when I see a story that takes approximately as much time as it takes to read Boys And Bees, I don't go for it. I'm lazy. And I thought that with this story, it would be the same as most others - I wouldn't find too much interest in it. However, I then find myself in the very next night just thinking to myself over and over again your DESCRIPTION for your book! Wow, that's a whole lot of great thinking you have, for me to be memorizing those first few lines when I haven't even started the book! The next day, I knew I had to go back and check it out. I haven't left it since, and I am quite positive that my reading journey here will last just as long as your writing one!