Boys and Bees

Boys and Bees

23 chapters / 34206 words

Approximately about 3 hours to read

Description:

When Lorabeth decided to fall in love, she knew it wasn't going to be easy. Unlike the bees that she trained, boys were strange, unpredictable creatures. Since the most popular girl in school, Hedda, receives love letters on a weekly basis, Lorabeth thought that taking a peek at those letters would help... or perhaps not. Lorabeth and Hedda are united by a strange deadly fire and a swarm of encroaching predators that threaten the school of apiology. Will Lorabeth be able to find true love and save her school from these mysterious enemies? And what does a coat rack, yellow ribbon, hypnotist, and tapioca have to do with it?

Cover Art by Tim Walker

Genres:

Romance, Serial, Novel
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almost 6 years ago J. R. Flynn's Archives said:

-.- Wow, I've been lagging! For "Olivia" I read the next chapter as soon as it was uploaded, but man.... I feel horrible!

I love love love the vivid imagery and descriptions in this! (as usual :D) You weave such wonderful dreamcathcers (in my perspective: dreamcatchers are wonderful, whimisical writings [ooh! alliteration!]) and this piece so far is no different :D

Great quality!

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almost 6 years ago Savannah Finger Dantona said:

Oh, man, do I want to know what's going on with Hedda. "Cold as crystals" was just a perfect way to describe her, but it was sad too, like there's just something beautiful about her that's died. It makes me feel so sad for her. I completely agree with Anande--I feel like Hedda tore Petro's letter up in denial of her feelings. I can't wait to find out why she believes she can't love (because I don't believe her, not a bit). I can't wait to read more. I love both Hedda and Lorabeth, strangely, and of course Petro. We've only had a short scene with him, and I already love him. And of course hope that he doesn't ever get stung. Another note-if I were in an English class and were analyzing this story, I would be noticing the contrast between Hedda, who receives love letters every day but says she can't love, and Lorabeth, who goes relatively unnoticed (except by her bees) but wants so much to learn to fall in love. Wow, wow, wow, Kimberly. Great new chapters. :) Can't wait for more!

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almost 6 years ago Riya S. said:

I don't know what to think of Hedda, honestly. After reading the 15th chapter, she just confused me further. She's awfully mysterious, I'll give her that. You're a great writer, by the way. It feels as if I'm with them, getting to know them slowly though they can't see me or hear me... most people would refer to this as stalking :)

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almost 6 years ago Linda D said:

Thanks for the new chapter. Has me more intrigued at each new chapter. One thing though. Sitting in the rocking chair. First it made her as comfortable as a sleepy cat, yet later her position in it was precarious? These two mental images seem to conflict.

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