25 days ago Shirlee Trinity said:

I love this story. And the cover. Is it Tim Walker? I could swear the cover's by him.

about 1 month ago Iniko Thornell said:

Hey, have you ever thought of trying to publish this book? Its really good, just saying. I'm only on chapter 7 and it just keeps getting better. Really good work!

3 months ago Hannah Rachel said:

After reading this a few days ago, I felt bad for not leaving a comment (I'm horrible like that). I thought I'd write one up to say just how much I loved this new chapter.

Caith seems like a nice guy, but it's too early to tell. His hypnotist background makes me hesitant to trust him, although I'm sure in the end I'll probably have a huge crush on him or something (I hope he doesn't end up being a big jerk; then you'd really make me eat my words). Like you said in the beginning of the chapter, he's two-faced. The point really got driven home when Headmistress Holcomb lets on that Caith has already enrolled in the school.

I side with Lorabeth for being standoffish towards him after Headmistress says that Caith will be sharing her hive. I imagine it sort of like having to share your most valuable possession with a total stranger. It will be interesting to see how they get along with that in coming chapters.

Okay, Rosalind is like the awesomest person ever. I don't know what I like so much about her (or Moira, for that matter), but something in her quirky personality makes me want to go along with all her silly campaigns. She sort of has me convinced that knitting needles DO harm bees--call me crazy.

Anyway, that's my two cents on this chapter. I really liked it. Hopefully I can now go pluck up the motivation to go comment on the other stories I'm reading. :)

3 months ago Laina Van Wingerden said:

Love this story!!!! Glad you wrote a new chapter :) Caith is intriguing, but i'm actually really glad you are making Lorabeth unsure about him. Adds drama and depth.