Alice in Wonderland

Alice in Wonderland

12 chapters / 1998 words

Approximately 10 minutes to read

Description:

Alice finds herself lost in a world very different than her own. Desperate to return home, she enlists the help of a man known only as “Hatter”. In a land where emotions are treated as drugs, she soon finds herself caught in a dangerous war between the Red Queen’s men, “The Suits”, and a rebellion group deemed “Cheshire”. Slowly, she grows to love this twisted Wonderland… and its inhabitants. Can she expose those for what they are? Remember, trust nothing at face value. (Finalist in the CinderContest ; note that Cheshires are human and Suits are robot ; UNDER CONSTRUCTION - I'm lengthening it out and generally making it better)

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12 months ago Sanya K said:

Is there going to be more or is that it? I loved this. Awesome twist about the robots and the emotions.

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almost 2 years ago Caitlynn Nikole said:

It moves just a little too fast. There's so much more that could have been done with this story. It is a good twist on the original though.

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about 1 month ago happywheelsgame said:

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over 3 years ago Silvera Starling said:

This is a cool story with a really cool concept. I like the idea of the emotion draining and emotions being a drug. It's a very original idea. However, there were some flaws. I think the pace was way too fast. The chapters were too short so things string together too closely and don't transition really well into another. I would also like to hear more about the world. I don't think there's enough description, so I don't really feel immersed in the story. If you work on these flaws, this story will become a lot better. Good luck writing!