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Chrissy's father left her to go chase his dream.
over 1 year ago Secret Author said:
Read and hearted =] If you would, please check out "Straightaway" on my page and if you like it, push that lil' ol' heart button. If you have already, my apologies and no response necessary haha =]. If you want, let me know whatever else you'd like me to read on your page and I'd be happy to.
about 2 years ago Della Nicole said:
I love this. It sort of reminded me of a lullaby for some reason. I love the rhyming
over 2 years ago Irene Lim said:
over 2 years ago ♥Felicia K. said:
Amazing poem! Everything flows really nicely, which is hard to do. The feelings of the girl are depicted very well.
over 1 year ago Ninja M said:
The poem is pretty good. It almost feels like a song (although more words would need to rhyme for something like that, and certain parts of the poem would been to be repeated as a chorus). You could consider using the phrase "I hope you find it" more than once for emphasis, since you chose that to be the title. Overall, good job!
(As a side note, I am a musician, so if you actually want to make this poem into a song, leave a comment on my profile and I can help.)
about 2 years ago Artemis Darklet said:
I give you an eight and a half, nine ISh. It was awesome,amazing even, but not excellent, but I have a critical sense of rating to if you take offense, please don't! I did not NOT give you a ten out of ten because I was trying to be mean! Seriously!
And also, seriously, awesome job.