13 chapters / 10178 words

Approximately about 1 hour to read


Aurora Rose is the youngest child of a powerful aristocrat. One day when she was little, a betrayal from with in the family, forces her to flee from her home leaving everything behind. Everything except for her family's magical dagger that now belongs to her. Her inheritance to become the next Head of the Roses. She must learn to survive hardships and a betrayal from within the family. Aurora doesn't know what will happen but she does know she will do anything to get back what is her's. No matter the cost.



over 6 years ago Leah Smithers said:

I loved how the author was speaking directly to the reader in this story. I thought this line in particular was great: "To know her personality you would have to talk to the people that didn't exist."


over 6 years ago Joie Ling said:

Thank you all for the criticism. i've fixed all the grammar mistakes I could see in chapters 2 and 4.


over 6 years ago NotAnna said:

Fantastic story, I absolutely need you to continue it, but there were some grammar and spelling errors. Just keep it in mind!

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over 6 years ago Cheyenne Carbaugh said:

I have to agree, there are a few grammar errors...but that's ok! We're judging content here! In any case, I think honestly it could use a bit of tweaking, but it's quite good for a beginning...keep up with it.


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almost 7 years ago Soleil A. Twist said:

You should proofread this story. There are a lot of grammar mistakes. All in all though this a great story and you should continue it.