Observer

Observer

1 chapter / 1419 words

Approximately 7 minutes to read

Description:

I always liked to observe. I was always unnoticed by others, so it made me an expert on studying people and things. But on the first day of senior year, that all changes.
My entry for the list contest!

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Writing, Short Story

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Comments(7)

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over 6 years ago Loan Le said:

Cute ending. I would pay more attention so that there are no typos in the piece, but it's something you can work on over time.

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over 6 years ago Abrielle Cross said:

I love this it's so sweet and cool!! You're a really good writer!! :)

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over 6 years ago Happy Maddie said:

Kudos

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over 6 years ago Fish Fingers and Custard said:

You did a good job.

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over 6 years ago Anna Mee said:

Your narrator has a nice voice and she is really easy to relate to. The writing is a little skippy, like you will be talking about one thing, then you jump right ahead to another, and it's really jolting. But its a good story. Well done.