over 4 years ago Jada said:

Short, sweet, and awesome :)


almost 5 years ago Jennifer said:

Lily, I'm still dreaming about my first kiss. If it's anything like this, then it will be quite magical! Anyway, great job!:)~jen


about 5 years ago Adrianna M said:

That was lovely. So many people overdo or underdog those kinds of scenes but you found a happy medium. It would be a great piece to write a longer story around!

Always me.

almost 6 years ago Ling Mei said:

Goddamn, this was adorable.


There aren't any reviews just yet. You should be the first to .