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Featured on the homepage under "handpicked figs" 4/9/2012 ^__^
Jan 20 YALSA prompt: Write about a first kiss. Please take a look and heart/comment/review if it deserves it!
almost 2 years ago Julia Shmoolia said:
Well, crap. That must suck.
"Oh, sweetie, I love you, you're such a good kisser and OM NOM NOM NOM NOM."
almost 2 years ago Rain7427 said:
Oh man that was....scary...
almost 2 years ago Emma said:
almost 2 years ago Ela K. said:
Hahahah this is absolutely CRAZYY!! But i love it!
almost 2 years ago Emma T said:
Funny in a weird, dark way. A blunt, frank way to deal with a strange topic. Really enjoyable and not too over-ambitious for a short.
almost 2 years ago Quinn E. Danger said:
For some reason, I don't think I feel as disturbed or scared as I should be, mostly because I don't feel scared or disturbed at all...
Oh well. My sense of "disturbing" or "scary" seems to be a lot different from everybody else's XD But I liked this. It was good, well written, just enough description for this kind of writing- all in all, brilliant, though personally I think it was missing something... don't know what though.