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Featured on the homepage under "handpicked figs" 4/9/2012 ^__^
Jan 20 YALSA prompt: Write about a first kiss. Please take a look and heart/comment/review if it deserves it!
over 3 years ago Emma said:
over 3 years ago Ela K. said:
Hahahah this is absolutely CRAZYY!! But i love it!
over 3 years ago Ink Revenge said:
OH MY GOD. OH MY GOD.
over 3 years ago Leah Nap said:
weird. . . i like it! anyways, you should continue the story!
first reaction: :o
over 3 years ago Emma T said:
Funny in a weird, dark way. A blunt, frank way to deal with a strange topic. Really enjoyable and not too over-ambitious for a short.
over 3 years ago Q. E. Danger said:
For some reason, I don't think I feel as disturbed or scared as I should be, mostly because I don't feel scared or disturbed at all...
Oh well. My sense of "disturbing" or "scary" seems to be a lot different from everybody else's XD But I liked this. It was good, well written, just enough description for this kind of writing- all in all, brilliant, though personally I think it was missing something... don't know what though.