over 2 years ago Margaret Borchert said:

Ahh, this brings me back to a trip to the BVI I took with some friends a few years ago. My only recommendations would be to watch your grammar and spelling (there was an instance where you used "except" instead of "accept") and try to follow the "show don't tell rule." Instead of just telling us that it's beautiful and peaceful, describe it for the readers so they can decide that for themselves. Keep up the great work and keep writing!