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Two of my poems (both written January 2012) I had as two seperate books that I put into one book. The poems are: "Rhiannon" and "I'm The One Laughing". I think "Rhiannon" is probably my best poem. It's also my first poem.
over 3 years ago Annika Olives said:
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I personally like Rhiannon better. It's definitely more powerful.
The second one didn't really feel like a poem to me. You had some long sentences and some short ones, which gave it sort of an awkward flow. It was almost like a story. You could cut back on the sentences a bit, make them have less syllables, and add some punctuation.
over 3 years ago Em Kam said:
That was fun to read and extremely powerfuL! Awesome poetry.
over 3 years ago Emily Caly Cadence said:
Rhiannon is a super-cool poem :) Keep it up girlie!
over 3 years ago ⓂTheHalf-LightⓂ said:
Nice poem, interesting rhythm.
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