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Read the one above this one. Finalist in the Flash Smash Contest.
about 5 years ago August Promnitz said:
Beautiful. Really touching stuff.
about 5 years ago kbj said:
I completely know how this feels. Great job.
about 5 years ago Papa Paul said:
Yikes, it was kinda choppy.....
I was in this contest with you and I know you only have 100 words but.... It kinda was.
It was like a bunch of prose mushed together.
I'm just trying to be honest.
about 5 years ago Karyn Jade Leigh said:
Because I don't remember commenting before, and it wasn't that great of a comment, here's my next one:
It's really neat how she watches everything like she does. People watchers make everything seems soooo much cooler.
It's really sweet how she flies in her head. Away. Sometimes all of us want to escape.
Good job! (and sorry for my earlier comment... I really don't know why I put that...)
over 4 years ago Lauren Jefferson said:
CONGRATULATIONS ON BEING A FINALIST!, Lauren
about 5 years ago Éirinn said:
You made me smile. :)
To fly is to achieve the highest of aspirations: doing the impossible.
I LOVE this.
Congratulations on being a finalist! It's a well-deserved award. :)