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*READ THIS FIRST* An exciting story about a girl in the future named Jade, her parents left her and she arrives at Wandred hall, an old orphanage. Little did Jade know, she is special. *IN EDITING*
over 3 years ago The one they call naive said:
Loved it! Can you please read/heart my story Words Unsaid? Thanks :)
over 4 years ago ally Marie said:
I think you should break up the paragraphs shorter but besides that it was good
over 4 years ago Katara said:
Keep it up, it's REALLY great!!!!!!!!!!!
over 4 years ago Shade Black said:
over 4 years ago *Lucy Taylor* said:
I think this story is very inventive and I like your style - just check for typos, otherwise,I love it!
over 4 years ago Dayna Rix said:
great detail and imagination. just remember to indent to start a new paragraph when it is needed. I like the plot that is developing here. keep writing :)