Apocalypse

Apocalypse

8 chapters / 15433 words

Approximately about 1 hour to read

Description:

*READ THIS FIRST* An exciting story about a girl in the future named Jade, her parents left her and she arrives at Wandred hall, an old orphanage. Little did Jade know, she is special. *IN EDITING*

Genres:

Action, Adventure, Novel
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Comments(90)

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almost 2 years ago The one they call naive said:

Loved it! Can you please read/heart my story Words Unsaid? Thanks :)

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over 2 years ago ally Marie said:

I think you should break up the paragraphs shorter but besides that it was good

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over 2 years ago Katara said:

Keep it up, it's REALLY great!!!!!!!!!!!

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over 2 years ago Shade Black said:

Amazing! :)

Reviews(26)

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over 2 years ago *Lucy Taylor* said:

I think this story is very inventive and I like your style - just check for typos, otherwise,I love it!

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over 2 years ago Dayna Rix said:

great detail and imagination. just remember to indent to start a new paragraph when it is needed. I like the plot that is developing here. keep writing :)

-Dayna