discord

discord

1 chapter / 282 words

Approximately 1 minute to read

Description:

Inspired by UVERworld's "DISCORD" and personal experiences. This describes an internal conflict about what actions to take in a depleting relationship~

Genres:

Writing, Poetry, Drama

Comments(12)

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over 5 years ago TortallMagic said:

this was abolutely beautiful!

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over 5 years ago Blank said:

Even though this is a poem, I felt like I was reading a story. I also liked how you incorporated the French it gave a vividness to it...a tenderness. I love to read inspired works, they're always the best. Thanks for the swap! (:

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over 5 years ago Lindsey Didier said:

I liked the French included. It would be cool anyways, but I could read it and understand because I'm taking French. Cool idea! good job.

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over 5 years ago ally Marie said:

Very good. It was short but packed many emotions

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over 5 years ago Zubin Hill said:

Hmmm.... I can't say I liked your repetition. It felt forced and became quickly boring. Perhaps more variance within the "living in discord" stanza would have been good?

Overall, though, I think you did a good job.

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over 5 years ago Rory Gilmore said:

I loved your writing. The style was unconventional which made that much more good. I loved the way you added French to in different parts. Great work!