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A story/poem in iambic pentameter. I modeled it after a dream I had.


Writing, Romance, Poetry


Faith mellark

over 4 years ago Ella said:

Yeah, like everyone else said. This is great. I found it on the homepage and thought it might be good and it was. :D


over 4 years ago Linda Dionne said:

This was a great poem. I didn't realize at first that the numbers were her ages but once I got it, it made more sense. I love how things are so simple in the beginning and once they get harder, she outgrows the swingset. The last line: "In graduation robes, they swung again." was the best line in the entire poem. Beautiful work.

Black bird

over 4 years ago Aviline said:

Amazing. You rhyme effortlessly. This is amazing. Congrats on being on the homepage!


over 5 years ago Roberta H. Shapiro said:

I'm not leaving a review because there's nothing to critique on. Really. I never knew you could write poetry. I really didn't. Not only is the formatting cool (like the ages and the importance of the swingset), but this is one of the only poems based on plot that I actually like. That's hard because I don't like it when they focus on plot XD

At any rate, me really like.


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