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about 1 year ago Lauren Sapp said:
Aw :( Poor guy; he lost his true love. The ending was very powerful, and this piece was well done. Nice job!
over 1 year ago Jinjin Tiger said:
Incredible story! Bravo! just one random thing, you spelled 'released' wrong during "released from the hospital". Also I love the message of how dangerous drunk driving is. Such great detail too. Again, bravo!
over 1 year ago Mermaid Annabella said:
Nice! Good imagery, detail and I was immediately intrigued. Hearted
over 1 year ago Melissa Somoza said:
Wow whoa wowwyyy whoa wow! That was so intense! So sad though:( You described everything so perfectly! And the end:(( poor guy still searching. Well done:DD
over 1 year ago Linsey said:
This had my attention by the time I noticed the sound words. I love all of the detail. It made me literally wince as I read it, and it takes a very good writer to affect the audience like that. This was so sad, but I think that makes it even better and realistic. Great job, and congrats!:D