Let Me Fly

Let Me Fly

1 chapter / 316 words

Approximately 2 minutes to read

Description:

A poem

Comments(14)

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over 5 years ago Clodie said:

This is really strong and amazing, well done!

Haha it's awkward how in my country "rant" and "can't" don't rhyme. LOLOL

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over 5 years ago Lucy Shifflett said:

Its refreshing to see a poem that rhymes on here. Keep up the good work ;)

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over 5 years ago B.o.B said:

i loved that poem! I loved the choice of words! :D

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over 5 years ago Crystal M. said:

LOVE (:

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almost 6 years ago Barbara H. said:

What I love about this is that you tell a story very well, even though it's in poetry. However, as I read through it the rhyme sounded a bit awkward, forced. Sometimes rhyme helps the words flow, other times it doesn't in poetry. It's not really something that's major enough to change, but that's just my opinion. Anyway, nice writing! Very unique, I can definietly see your 'style' as a writer in this piece.:)