More

More

1 chapter / 248 words

Approximately 1 minute to read

Description:

So there's this guy.

Genres:

Writing, Poetry

Comments(6)

Img_1253

over 5 years ago Dani Bernstein said:

wow. great job! you could totally turn this into a song if u wanted to

Marshmallow perfection

over 5 years ago Chocoholic! said:

Confusion of the mind And confusion of the heart, Are very different things Yet both tear me apart.

I’m comforted with knowledge That quiets my wondering brain. But where do I find answers To calm the hearts unending pain?

I look up on the internet, What is 2 +2? It pops out an answer And thus my brain is soothed.

But what kind of machine Can tell me what I feel. Is it love or just strong friendship? Is it fake or is it real?

I don’t know what to do, To calm this heart of mine. Confusion of the heart is so much worse Than confusion of the mind.

Marshmallow perfection

over 5 years ago Chocoholic! said:

GET OUT OF MY BRAIN! Like no kidding, you have described my feelings to a perfect T. Confusion is awful and stressful and painful and honestly, confusing! I actually wrote a poem about it. It's not half as good as this one but I wanted someone to read it before it gets posted anyways so, I'll just post it here as almost a video response to a video, but with poems instead of video's.... if that makes sense. Either way, Perfect poem! Great depth and emotion. COMPLETELY relatable!

Russet-potatoes

almost 6 years ago Eve said:

Ahhh! This made me happy inside:) I've probably said this enough for it be annoying now, but I absolutely ~adore~ your poetry; rhythm, pacing, content, message- everything hits right where it should. This is what I call a gift =]

Reviews

There aren't any reviews just yet. You should be the first to .