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dont ruin your life. live to the fullest. RIP all suicide victims.
about 1 year ago Melissa Somoza said:
This is so heartbreaking:( Very moving and touching though! It's such a vital topic. Teen sucide. It's so sad:( You did a very good job with this without going to crazy. Even though it's kinda depressing, I enjoyed reading this:D
about 1 year ago T.X.Jaine said:
Wow! this is amazing! I love writing about suicide and self harm and I get a lot of grief about it, but honestly its something i experience daily (not myself) and it influences a lot of my writing. Check out my poem Blend, Ink, or Then End. (Non eof these are on my front page though so youll have to dig a bit!) thanks!
about 1 year ago Dasani said:
This was a great poem. Deep too. I'm glad I'm not made of dangerous materials :3
But really... Great job :D
about 1 year ago Stephanie Sy said:
Not bad. Reminds me of a game that used not sentences, but words and phrases to convey a powerful meaning. The repetition of some words adds some depth in to this piece. :3
Can't really think of anything else to say...nice job.
over 1 year ago Corey Stevens III said:
This is very touching. Sad. yet speaks how getting help can be much easier than struggling with the problem.